Please comment on my photo

[Graham P]

This is a photo of my niece Becky. Although much "photoshopped", I quite like the effect.
Do you think I have overcooked it ? any comments ?
Thanks..

[monish]

This is a superb piece of work. Absolute control on the lighting and the exposure. The hair is fantastic especially the bit of hair she is holding. A minor comment - the teeth is slightly overexposed. Can we tone down the frontal flash a wee bit. But well done. 

[Nigel]

Great shot Graham. Like it a lot, nice overall effect, good catchlights, like the skintones. Some judges might not like the ear-rings but what do they know !!!!! GGOD STUFF MATEY.

[Graham P]

Thanks for your comments, perhaps i will dig out the original shot and try without burning out the highlights. I found the photo a little difficult to crop as i thought the shoulder looked a tad large..